A lot of fair points. Lets unpack a bit of this. [quote=@Xaltwind] Awwww, widdle kiddy, kiddy-cat~ That said, here are [u][i]my personal[/i][/u] thoughts on Lord Chompy Bits. The character feels like a combination of Salem, Chuunitrixx and Light. In the story, the character Graft has gone throguh a lot of effort to create vermin/animal-like spy-drones for Salem, a telekinetic doll. Lord Chompy Bits, if accepted, would completely negate the need for this, as he could just use his cats to perform undercover surveillance without anybody noticing or paying attention to a stray cat here or there. It would also clash somewhat with the story, since nobody would have thought of this yet as the character did not exist when the need for 'spies' was broguht up. In addition to Salem's spiy-drones, Chuunitrixx also has a network of mimic-spies who are doing similar things. With Lord Chompy Bits presence, we would have three different people who specialize in espionage and undercover intelligence gathering. If that's what you want though, then that's up to you of course. Also, his use of illusions, mind-control and fear are very similar to the effects of Light's insanity aura, albeit maybe not exactly the same, the end result is close enough.[/quote] To be honest, I started off with a concept and just ran with it while the thoughts were still fresh. I did skim through most of the other sheets, and at a glance, I can tell the Chateau has such a varied bunch that I would overlap with someone else no matter what I did. Melee DPS? Magic DPS? Tank? Support? Scout? You have multiple of each. Edit; I have no idea how to solve for the "The other Characters should have thought of involving Lord Chompy Bits" part. That's kind of a glaring problem... Edit2; I'm more attached to the character than his abilities, so if this problem can't be reconciled, I'll just redesign him completely. [quote=@Xaltwind] Moreoever, when I read through the sheet, I get the feeling that he has no "true body", but can swap freely between the various cats. This isn't really fitting with the setting, as NPCs has to have a specific body which the Player who created them worked on. Even Salem who can swap bodyparts and take on various shapes or bodies, still has a 'true form', but I get the feeling that Lord Chompy Bits isn't so much a specific character as he is a 'consciousness', which is a bit too intangible. Of course, I may be wrong and he does have an actual body, but I didn't get that feeling when reading the sheet. [/quote] I read through the abilities again, and I see what you mean. To clarify, he does have a "true body". It's the one that wears the collar gifted from C.L. I will add that as a note somewhere, so it's significantly more obvious. [quote=@Xaltwind] Finally, his skils and equipment that allow him to turn his fangs and claws into Relic-class weaponry and use High-tier magic... That doesn't really seem to fit either, as he is below level 60... Due to how the roleplay is structured, the max tier of magic any of the NPCs can use is 6th tier, so I'm not certain if that is what you called 'high tier', or if you were implying that Lord CHompy Bits could use magic of an even higher tier then that - which would be impossible. In addtion, again, Relic-class weapons seem a bit too powerful for a character who is barely half-way to the level cap... But again, I don't know the actual parameters or "numbers" of what you categorize as Relic-weaponry, so I might just be making assumptions that are wrong. [/quote] Yeah.... I'm not attached to the Mantle of Dweomer Essence piece at all. My brain said "Oh, this would be cool!" and I went with it. Naberal isn't much farther along than Lord Chompy Bits, and she can use 7th tier magic, as well as a few 5th tier ones. Maybe it's mid-tier instead of high-tier? *shrug* In any case, the tiers seem kinda loosely defined, so it's really just a matter of changing the semantics in the description, so he meets the expected power level of this game. [quote=@Xaltwind] OTHER THAN THAT THOUGH! I like his fuzzy little face. I imagine him sounding like an old, classy dandy when he speaks and I think he would be a fun character to have around and roleplay with, much because of his cat-like nature and personality. That's what I think of the widdle kiddy. ^^ [/quote] In my head, he is voiced by Tim Curry. o.o