Yes, there's definitely plenty of plot advancements in that post. Good work. I only have a question for consistency purposes:

Are they resting at an inn, or a camp they made? 


For my post, I'll likely have my character awake to noise from something happening by an outside party (Which I'll describe in the next post). So he'll notice your character's human appearance before searching for the noise. 

Does that work for the next post, or do you want it to go in a different direction?