Now that I'm back on track with reading posts and getting through the week. 

[@KatKook] I really like your character. I like her powers and I like what you've done with her so far. If you're still interested in continuing this story, then I'd love to have you. 

[@JrVader] While I do like the idea of a melee fighter, there are just a couple of things about your character I'd like to ask about. The photo is a bit low quality, and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind changing it? My friends and I can help you find a photo that fits your character if you're in need of help at all. 

Also, the fact that he doesn't know any magic (according to his sheet) is a bit concerning. Since they were gifted powers by their celestial, I would have thought that he knows at least some. Even if it is just enhancing his physical capabilities. Like enhanced perception and strength. I believe you said that. I'd like to see your skeleton reflect that. I think he would be an interesting addition to the team considering most, if not all, of the characters have some sort of ranged specialty. 

His backstory is a bit strange to me. Considering that this is more of a modern day magic rp. Like it's set in the time of cell phones and cars and all that. Their town isn't backwards enough to have caravans, and I don't see there being some sort of zen monastery in a mountain village. I'm okay with him being a martial arts instructor because it ties in nicely with his abilities, but there are some aspects of your character that I just don't see really working with the thread itself.