[@Not Fungus] Your character seems mostly alright for me. Just a question, his Soulful Light ability heals wounds or just cleanses him/others? [@ZAVAZggg] I wouldn't worry too much about trying to fit your character to or having them fit themselves to yours. The premisse of the story and very nature of the Abyss make it so that beings that shouldn't coexist are able to. Since time and space mean little to nothing down there. That aside, the only form available for his Quintessence is that of a sword, right? You mention that in the weapon section but don't make it clear enough in the ability section.