I will get to reading through each sheet shortly. Having a bit of lunch and trying to recover from crappy night's sleep. In the meanwhile, why don't I answer some more questions? [@Reia] If you're going for mostly iliterate but can still do maths, I'd suggest something like E or D ranks in INT. C is pretty high in terms of education. Remember, F is "no real education", so it stands to reaeson with E-rank INT, you'd be able to read and write, though not very good, as well as do simple maths. Don't worry, there are tons of magical MMO and CRPG-esque items out there, just waiting for you guys to loot and grab. Myriads of enchantments and [s]fun[/s] curses await your patronage. Being a Litteling is fine. As I said before, if you want to make up your own species, that's totally okay, as long as they're not horrifically overpowered or just, plain stoopids. I don't have a discord and [b][i]I[/i][/b] personally won't set one up. This again has to do with bad eyesight, meaning I acn't actually make use of the program. That doesn't stop you guys from setting one up for yourselves though. But, if you want to do collabs with me specifically, I'm afraid PM convos are your only option. [b]EDIT:;[/b] Blurp, missed some things. If you [i]want[/i] to include why your character was drawn to the falling star/light in your history, rather than in your initial post, that's entirely up to you. You should always post your unaccepted CS in the OOC before you post in the Character Tab. Only approved and accepted characters go in the chara tab section. [hr] [@Reia] Branwen Burrows is mostly fine. The only thing I'd like you to do is remove the bit about acid in her Earth-element resistance. Acid and Earth are, in this setting at least, considered seperate elements - otherwise, you could kill Trolls with rocks... Once you've done that though, she's perfectly accepted and you can go ahead and post her sheet in the Charavter Tab. Welcome. :) [@Afro Samurai] Atua looks fine. I just wanted to ask two things: 1. There is no mention of her receivin g formal education while in the I'wali territory, aside from hunting, woodcarving and such. Yet her INT is rather high - so, do the I'wali teach their young to read and write in their native language/alphabet? Is it a boon from Imare? Or is it just that you wanted a bigger mana-pool? 2. Her twin daggers, as far as I can tel are unenchanted and have no particular powers or effects other than being decorated? Other than this, I'm not sure about the whole "industrialization" bit. Remember that the technology-level of Oublioth is on par with medeival europe, so line-production and such large-scale manufacturing does not exist. I'm also amused that the I'wali know how to make carbon-aluminium... XD But regardless, she looks fine and you're welcome to post her in the Character Tab-part of the topic. Welcome to you as well. :) [@ERode] Cecilia Tonitrus looks lovely just as before. My only issue is with 'Storm's Boon' - I'd rather you keep one of its effects, either the numbing paralyzing effect for melee strikes, OR the thrown explosion and returning to wielder. Having both in a single skill is a bit much, unless said explosion radius is very small... In which case, it's fine. Other than that, she's obviously accepted. You're most welcome to post her in the Character Tab, my friend. :)