[@Gentlemanvaultboy] That character looks amazing! I really like the interpretation of the epithet, and what her powerset says about her conception of the word. I'd say you've made a perfect fit for this world. Just one thing: the name of the resort is Otterholt Point, rather than Otter Creek. [@Rockin Strings], not bad so far. Still, there are a couple aspects to the power that could be ironed out. Running fast involves a whole bunch of strides, so instead of just having super speed, you might make Quick Stride a sort of flash step instead, allowing him to quickly dash from one point to another in a short distance. A mile+ teleport for Long Stride is a little out there, especially 5 miles to a place he can't see or has a straight line to. I'd be fine with Long Stride requiring a charge time to be able to 'step' to anywhere he can see under a mile. That's still a pretty darn strong ability, but not a broken one. [@TruthHurts22] Are you quite sure about this? This roller-coaster ride doesn't inspire a lot of confidence. If you like, you can make your character just to get your idea out, and we/I can tell you what we/I think without it actually going into the RP.