[@duskshine749]

One thing I forgot to mention in the Discord- is therea limit to what atoms he can slow down? Could he slow carbon (I.E freeze people's skin off?) Once that's answered they should be good.

[@Godlikeblade]

One thing that does bug me is how you've changed the formatting of the CS, something I explicitly asked people not to do. The 'appearance with picture' bit needs to be taken out of the hider, the image should be removed and he would [b]still[/b] be in the standard issue grey subject clothing, not anything special despite his size.

Also, I get this is likely because I haven't actually told you what security ranking he would be, but he should be M[b]B[/b]-2010-AXP.

Secondly, I will say that... How does he [b]not[/b] realise something's off? Nine year olds aren't total idiots- they know that people don't generally run away screaming, so how is he not aware that something's wrong with him? 

Also, the phrasing for his ability is just... Badly off. Firstly, the technical term for his fight or flight ability would be something along the lines of 'stimulates an intense adrenal repsonse,' and secondly, that line shouldn't exist at all, because it takes agencies away from other players. If they want their characters to enter fight or flight, that's up to them.

Also, I will in addition say that do you [b]really[/b] want an ability that causes people to go on a murderous rampage against a nine year old with no obvious other defences? This RP won't be pulling punches, so that places your character in a very dangerous spot. In addition, there shouldn't be mentions of 'staff observations,' it should be declarative facts. MB-2010-AXP [b]can[/b] only be seen as his true form, etc etc.

Don't get what the happy, say, angry bits are for, really, that's quite poorly explained.

[@ReedeThe23rd]

You've got a little square bracket left in by that ID number.

As for the overall sheet. It looks good, I'd just like a lot of the 'also known to some' wishy-washy bits cleaned up into more definitive language. Also known [b]as,[/b] that kind of thing. 

[@BCTheEntity]

He's in. Well done.

[@Randomness]

Almost on track to be in without any adjustments! Just remove the struckout bit- I get what you're going for, but when staff reconsider an ability they just delete it.

[@Vixen58]

There are [b]far[/b] too many subject notes, which dramatically break up the flow of this CS. The ONLY subject note I see as actually being needed is the 'no skin to skin contact' one, which should go after the description of his power. Alternately, put a 'See addendum' in there somewhere, to imply more writing on a seperate document- which you've already done, so I don't see why the massive amounts of subject notes are needed.

[@Bazmund]

First thing... Please, [b]please[/b] stick to the CS. I did specifically make notes about that, so it being uniform is sort of what I was gunning for. 

'final child of an otherwise remarkable' Is this meant to be unremarkable?

And the big thing:

This man is not getting a computer. This man isn't getting a [b]circuit board.[/b] Facility B would only trust him with electronics in a controlled testing environment, and absolutely nowhere else.