[quote=@Infinite Cosmos] [@Ghost Note]May I ask what kind of rewriting are you expecting/wanting to see? [/quote] This might be a tough one mainly because my problem with his backstory (and well character in general) is that he's really over the top with the whole assassin backstory. I thought about it and there might not be any way to make him acceptable in my eyes without more or less making a new character. I really think you should just make a new character altogether because I find him very unrealistic. Sorry to say.