[@Antarctic Termite] [hider=Deadlion] NF: He intends for his god to be killed off immediately, leaving behind a hero, so I don’t think we should be too critical about this - not that I see anything which needs to be criticized anyway. The Portfolio itself is very specific and niche, so I doubt anyone else is going to want to compete for it before Termite writes him off. Overall, I approve. Capy: ✔️ It's alright, I hope he stays around for a long time and has lots of adventures :^) Zee: Cool story bro. The hero is acceptable, as long as might costs/Prestige Points are accounted for. Accepted. [/hider] [@Enzayne] [hider=Lover Goddess of Love] NF: My only concern is that the Domain is too specific. Can three portfolios be justified underneath Love? I Don’t know. Capy: ✔️ No concerns on my side. Love can mean a lot of things so I think a creative player can make great use of the domain. Sometimes by being a domain the concept is open to wider interpretations and that leads to variety. Realm seems fine if they intend on getting mortals to it, domain form being almost the same is something I think they might want to change later, avatar is great. Zee; Another wonderful addition to the cast. Can’t wait to see the interactions between Neiya and others. Accepted. [/hider] [@Hooks] [hider=Epidural] NF: I approve. Though, I am somewhat wary toward mind control and whatnot. If he chooses to break an important character’s mind, it should be with the permission of the character’s owner. Capy: ✔️ Yeah, mindcontrol obviously cannot be enforced without meta approval. I think everything is fine, if anything I feel like this could be a primordial god but at the same time maybe the lifeblood wouldn’t initially want to create a god who is so similar to the void it fought and it takes mortal thoughts to create the ironic creation. Zee; Another positive addition to the cast. Can’t wait to see what becomes of Sevdural and the interactions he has with other life. Accepted. [/hider] [@Frettzo] [hider=Big Plant Energy] NF: I created a height limit for avatars, and a fifteen kilometer high tree is a pretty huge violation of that, even if it is presumably stationary. Capy: I don’t care about the height limit if it's stationary. A mindless character with no thoughts is a risky pick, I would like to remind Frettzo of the Mk2 nature god whose player left because playing an animal was hard. If he is fully sure about going for this, then I won’t object. Zee; I’ve talked with Frettzo in length before how he didn’t necessarily want to pay a god in the next iteration. I think this is, perhaps a compromise of sorts. I am confident he can make it work, and I await to see what horrors he’s cooking up. Accepted. [/hider] [@Slime] [hider=In the Heat of Passion] NF: The sheet seems like it lacks detail, but it tells us everything we need to know and there’s nothing inherently wrong with it, so in my opinion the lack of detail isn’t such a huge drawback. I think this should be accepted. Capy: Born from conceptual fire I think the passion port works well. Question is where they will go from here, but I think it has good potential. Zee; What a babe. Accepted. [/hider] [@AdorableSaucer] [hider=Moon Bae] NF: Approved. Capy: It’s a pretty concise character and I can’t really point at anything I feel like could be better. I think a gentle goddess of the night is a pretty good take and so far it seems like a character who stays on theme while flexible to expand beyond. Zee; Gibbou, sister of Oraelia, what more could you ask for? We talked at length where Gibbou could go with the domain and port she is starting out with. It’s a good theme and is thematic to the setting. I know for a fact Sauce will make it work. The app looks good, and will make a good addition to the cast. Accepted. [/hider] [@Zurajai] [hider=Yes] NF: So long as his Domain adheres specifically to nature within the ocean, as he defined it, I am fine with that. I have no issues with anything else. Capy: I think it works well, I don’t mind nature going for a more ‘biome’ angle so I think the domain and port are fine, the forms are interesting even if a bit similar, the personality being alien can be a strength or an issue for the playability depending on how things evolve, but I think it will go well. Zee; A very thought out, and superb app that was easy to read and understand. Klaar is a nature god, and his domain of nature, covers ocean life very well. As long as that theme is respected, I have no quarrels with it. Oceans is a good portfolio choice and is thematic with the theme of Nature. There are many different pathways a nature god can do, and one who specializes in oceans, should be no different. Klaar’s realm is an interesting place that I will never go to, for my fear of the ocean is real here. The cthulhu vibe is real, and he will make an excellent addition to the cast. Accepted [/hider] [@Legion02] [hider=The other Q God] NF: A god of magic is something that was missing in Mk3. The sheet itself is detailed and explains everything quite well. Ultimately, I approve. Capy: I think it's fine for gods to have portfolios over ‘original’ concepts, it is especially helpful when it comes to fantasy content, provided its a logical thing it's no issue and in this case it seems to be well established. Personality seems cool, playing both sides in conflicts can be a good take for some gods to have while others are stuck in conflicts. Zee: M & M. Gotta love it. Accepted. [/hider] [@jetipster] [hider=How to pronounce?] Capy: How do you pronounce this, lol. Anyway, it's a pretty straightforward character I believe. Goes beyond just being a cold god of the cold and I think the focus on intimacy and logic is beneficial. No complaints. NF: Yeah, I agree. Zee: Agree, I yeah. Accepted. [/hider] Edit; [@Vahir] [hider=Whips and chains] Zee; Great potential here for… stuff. NF: It is an interesting character - especially the bit about him being enslaved in his own realm, it’s not normally something that can happen, but if he’s fine with it then I don’t see why not. Though we need to make it clear to him that, since his realm appears to house “the souls of the damned”, he will probably have to work with Commodore’s god to some extent. Also, I’m somewhat concerned that it might take a while for his god to be born, since I’m assuming it requires mortals to progress to the point where they have slavery. Capy: It won’t take a while because Turn 1 will already be like, copper age to bronze age, which means some sort of slavery already exists. I had some issues with his portfolio and domain but talking things through I think he has a good idea about freedom and will be a very interesting take on our cast. Accepted. [/hider] [@LokiLeo789] [hider=The big, small guy] Loki - Boris NF: The Nature Domain is a bit strange. Do you think a Stone or Earth Domain would be more fitting? Other than that, the sheet is fine. Capy: ✔️ I really like boris, the fact he is an animal seems interesting, though some players have struggled with playing non-human characters I feel like the Mk4 systems do a better job at this than other Mks did. Personality is alright, fits well the theme of a mountain I believe, the realm seems more connected to Galbar than others, but I think that is okay if done correctly. Its a pretty nice idea overall. Zee: With a little bit of change, we got it to work out. Gratz, you’re the BOAR. Accepted. [/hider]