[@The Wyrm] Looks good. The Ruline are a hybrid between Orc and Arkronian? Works for me. Maybe add a quick describtion of the current consul and you can move Second Rhaetian Republic to the character tab. I like the little details in the culture section. That makes the place sound unique and flavorful. Additional details can always be added through roleplay and exposition :) [@Blandina] I'll start off with a few minor points that will help you a lot with your future roleplaying here. Maybe you've corrected it already when I post this and then you can ignore it :) Try to use BB code when you're making sheets. Make different tabs bold and/or in a different color like The Wyrm has done. That makes charactersheets much more clear to read. [b]My text here[/b] makes it bold. You can change color [color=color code]my text here[/color] will change it to the selected color. Here is a link to a list with color codes https://absitomen.com/index.php?topic=331.0 I've quickly scanned your sheet and it looks good so far. I'll give it a more thorough read later today. Maybe add already a quick description of the three kings. That doesn't have to be a big charactersheet. You can always expand on it later. [@Dinh AaronMk] The nation sheet you've posted in the int check is accepted. Just add a quick description of the king and you can move it to the character tab. Name, gender, age will do. Further detail can be done in game and later added to the sheet if you feel like it. I really would love to see some nations that where on the rebel side. So far all sheets that have been submitted where on the side of the crown.