[@silvermist1116] I find it weird that you put "Jewish & White" in his ethnicity section. Given one is an ethnic group and another is a skin color... when you could have gotten away with just white - but that's just me. Also, I know Asta is a nickname but it's kinda weird that you call him Elias in some sections of his sheet but Asta is the other. It's just confusing to read.

Now, onto the meat: his abstraction. I think it needs to be better explained for a number of reasons. For starters, it could be better explained that Elle is the Apparition that's affixed to him. Because that section is a liiiil' weird. Also, if he's Affixed then he wouldn't receive any powers beyond maybe aura reading, so it wouldn't be him that uses it, but instead, Ellie that can do all this stuff. You say that he can manipulate emotions but you don't really elaborate on that part, but personally I think you should make the main abstraction Ellie's creative defense and just say he can understand emotions through aura reading. Namely, because I think Creative Defense is the cooler ability and you won't get a lot of usage out of emotional manipulation.

[quote]Powerful attacks can take it out and send Elle back Asta[/quote]

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