[@Milkman] Thanks! I appreciate it! I just wanted to make sure that all three monarchs were needed, and how the Skekarii monarchs fit into the hierarchy, so I appreciate the response.

As far as what I was wanting to change goes, I was wanting to edit the economy and charachters a bit. I already have that the Skekarii mountain clans engage in mining and agriculture but I also say that King Mahd is kinda notable for expanding mining so I was wanting to stress a bit more in the economy section that a big portion of it is from the mining operations, as their aquaculture is mostly just used to feed their people and doesn't have much export. I also wanted to mention magic a little bit since it does exist in this world. Since magic comes from other worldly sources I thought it might work to have the High Priests have some ability with it, mostly in regards to being able to help make sure that the aquaculture harvests are sizeable. Beyond that I was also thinking that I would detail a bit more the three major clans that the monarchs come from, as well as a couple of the more notable factions, in order to just give a bit more flesh to my people.