[@Conrad] Looks good but there is one elephant in the room that needs to be addressed.

[quote]
Military:
	Since the formation of the Hegemony, the military has now been reformed. Armies are now semi-professional, centered around geographical regions of the realm. In times of war, each region will provide a regional army composed of no more than 8.000 soldiers, as agreed with the arkronite crown. In total, Canthor is legally allowed up to 24.000 soldiers, split along three main regions: Western Canthor, Middle Canthor and Eastern Canthor. One army is composed of 5.000 soldiers, 2.000 cavalry and 1.000 auxiliary (engineers, siege experts and miscellaneous). In reality, Canthor's manpower can effectively raise up to 50.000 military personnel altogether. The traditional light marine infantry used for centuries in riveranian warfare has been steadily replaced, due to the hegemonic campaigns against the republicans, with a modern elite heavy infantry units composed of pikemen, halberdiers and bowmen, with an elite corps of heavy cataphract cavalries. However, levied peasants remain an integral part of the armies, and are the main bulk of the mobilized armies. The only remaining separate military unit is the Shanna's Chosen, a religiously fanatic sect of military trained soliders specifically chosen to guard the capital and the hegemon.[/quote]

[quote]Some guidelines about nation creation:
[b]* I don't care about numbers, avoid using them. Rather write about how your society functions and what the effects of the terrain and climate are on their culture.[/b] <------------ 
* Work together with your fellow roleplayers to write some shared history. Prior to the arrival of the Men from Beyond the sea most nations where at eachother throat and old wounds might still exist.
* Players can create their own races as long as they follow the following guidelines; The general guidelines are that the races must resemble humans in their capabilities and how they live. In short, they must live on land, eat food, drink water, breath air walk on two legs and be in a decent size range compared to humans. Avoid races that are warped demons, that fly, live underwater or live in total hellscapes that are inaccessible to others.[/quote]

The military part is not really in line with the guidelines for nation creation. Can you rewrite that section without using numbers? I like the splitup between regions. Something along the lines of "Each army consists primarily of infantry supported by some cavalry and specialist auxilliary forces." will do. 

There is also another question I have. You've said you wanted to extend your territory but never posted a new map. Can you do that so that I can adjust the map?