[quote=@Milkman] [@Conrad] Looks good but there is one elephant in the room that needs to be addressed. The military part is not really in line with the guidelines for nation creation. Can you rewrite that section without using numbers? I like the splitup between regions. Something along the lines of "Each army consists primarily of infantry supported by some cavalry and specialist auxilliary forces." will do. There is also another question I have. You've said you wanted to extend your territory but never posted a new map. Can you do that so that I can adjust the map? [/quote] Sure thing, my bad that I forgot this RP is not focused on resource but on story telling, I'll rewrite everything according to the rules and guidelines and post it. I saw somebody else trying to claim the swampy area in blue on the map so I decided to renounce my claims and leave the borders as they are.