[@Randomness]
I love Etrian Oddysey so Faf Knight is more than welcome. As for some feedback?
- Nothing's wrong with it to be completely honest, if you'd like to work with me on the Lock/Key thing send me a PM. 
- Maybe make him a tad stronger around the board? Give some of those talents some more meat them description wise? Same thing with the abilities, maybe even combine some of the minor ones together into larger overarching abilities? 

[@Anakin]
Nothing is too OP in a premise like this, just two things I'd offer before I go into full on reviews when we get more sheets.
- Maybe rethink some of the less serious stuff, especially about his looks? I'm not outright against the meme that it presents, but it's a bit lacking in detail and if you're going to take that route I'd prefer it be a more fleshed out.