Trying to make a synopsis of the religion my pretty church boy is following, I'd like some pointers on what can be improved. Whether it to be a simple grammatic mistake or perhaps a different idea that sounds interesting!

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[center][h1][color=gold]The Cults of Guolegur Logi[/color][/h1]
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[color=#dedede]	Claimed as a religion of the people, the cult remains a cult only due to its large amount of freedom. Thus, in all but name the cult is most definitely a church and though not united it holds a great amount of potential power in stout politics. Its divided power directly relating to the freedom of teaching the religion and the basic practices of the religion has caused the potential influence as a political entity to be relatively unseen. Despite this, however, a few of the cults have grown to a substantial amount so that they may hold some influence in the politics of much larger bodies such as entire countries. Other than this, though, most cults merely have power on a local scale and thus are tired much more into the well-being of the people[/color]

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[center][h3][color=#adadad][b]Logi[/b] - The flame that each cult cultivates within their churches or temples.[/color][/h3][/center]

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[center][h2][color=#eebb30][u]Rettur Logan[/u][/color][/h2][/center]
[color=#dedede]	Or simply known as the “Flame’s Rights” are the basic practices of the religion overall and is the only piece uniting the cults together. The basic idea is the praise of the Guolegur Logi, though the name varies—greatly—depending on the culture. The reason most can agree that their cults are related to each other is due to the presence of the Divine Flame’s magic (the Logi) within each of the respective cults. [/color]
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[center][h3][color=#eebb30][u]The Storir Logar[/u][/color][/h3]
[color=#dedede]The largest of the cults and the most influential cults to exist currently. Though it started 
as an official title, after a great increase in diplomacy between individual
 cults it began to gain official power until becoming officially recognized.[/color][/center] [hr]


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