Only Servant Reviews at the moment. [hider=Servant Reviews] [@SSW] [hider=Jacob/Isreal review] - Can you clarify more on what Israel - Father of a Nation does? I'm pretty sure it gives him increased defense/attack, but not how much of an increased defense/attack. (Unless you expect him to be harmed by only attacks that are anti-country/hits with anti-country attacks, which would be a massive no.) Provide an example scenario to a mod if wish, since putting something into a scene in context always helps. - Please add some limits to Jacob’s Ladder, or please reclarify its effect. The way you have it written, it sounds a lot like a "God says it's my turn to autohit you now." At the moment, the only restriction that comes to mind is that it procs against another servant's Luck. Luck is somebody's ability to defy fate, so that seems fitting. If you already considered luck a proper counter to Jacob's ladder, that's fine. I just want it noted in your NP somewhere. So other players don't go in thinking they have no counterplay. [/hider] [@Yukitamas] [hider= Dante Alighieri Review] Yuki, please respond to the message sent to you by Indra, regarding examples of how you plan to use your skills/noble phantasms. As they are heavily relying on conceptual attacks, examples of their usage in a semi-serious manner would greatly help with our review. [/hider] [@King Cosmos] [hider=Heracles Review] - Nine lives carries the concept of ""killing something no matter how many times it regenerates." Feel free to include that in your sheet. Since it's specifically designed to kill people with a healing factor. - Non Plus Ultra - Pillars the Support the Sky at the Edge of the World doesn't really work with the rest of your sheet. Since it's basically dropping your spears and making a "everybody dies if they walk past them" point. Please message me, and we can talk about finding something that fits better. (General rule, chats will always go with the most meme usage of something, rather than the most useful or reliable. And Herc's character isn't really the kind to just throw his problems into the void.) [/hider] [@Aoko Aozaki] [hider=Mehmed Review] - Please include info on what you consider to be 'Status effects' in your Ghazi skill. At the moment, it's a skill that basically negates any and all things that aren't a punch to the face. Which is a no, mostly on the grounds that it's just a better version of Protection of the Faith, without the risk of turning into an uber zealot. Consider reducing the range of its effects. - Imperial Privilege (Roman), we're fine with an EX Imperial Privilege, on the grounds that it is strictly limited to 'Roman' skills. So no Chinese Martial Arts or Japanese sword fighting. [/hider] [@ManyThings] Sigurd is accepted. [@Red Alice] Chiyou is accepted. [@Scallop] Samson is accepted. [/hider]