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[@Ammokkx]: All right, scrapped zombies. If I'm going to hang myself tonight, may as well [url=https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=5176678]tie my own noose[/url] while I'm at it and throw another theoretical deck onto the table.

Turns out, I suck at coming up with generic decks to any meaningful degree. Who would've guessed?
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As the deck is I'd approve it, 'cause there's nothing it does offensively badly. I do worry about it a bit, though, since you put in a lot of tribute monsters with very few low-levels to support it, and no real way to get them on the field without Ancient Rules or Swing of Memories(which is temporary). I get what you're going for, but you might want to consider swapping out maybe 1-2 tribute monsters with lower levelled cards and also swap some spells and traps around to help protect your monsters a little more. This isn't required, but I think you'd be making life easier on yourself.