[quote=@Morose]
[@MsMorningstar] So, here's the things I've noticed that need edits (my co-GM may spot more when she gets off work):

-Sleep deprivation as a fear... I would suggest adding a qualifier onto that or swapping it out entirely. Since sleep deprivation is arguably the norm for this group. If you mean someone forcing her to stay awake, add [i]forced[/i] in front of it and that'll be good.
-Delete the descriptions in her skills - just need the name (i.e. "Haggling" not "Haggling (Getting that five dollar item for two bucks at the pawn shop)")

I'll message you the info for our Discord server and our backup forum. The last bit is a question for you - at this moment, would you like for her to start off unaffiliated with a group or would you want her to be a member already of the Underground or the Hellfire Club?
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Alrighty, I'll make those edits! Thank you for getting back to me so soon! As far as sleep deprivation goes, I did mean forced but I think I'll swap it out with something else.