Second round of reviews. Same rules as the first. [hider=Ashurbanipal (Rider)] -End to C, Luck to B -First Noble Phantasm rank to C. -Second Noble Phantasm rank shouldn’t be scalable. Change to B+. [/hider] [hider=Sigmund] No changes required.[/hider] [hider=Koji] -Luck to B -Split Genjutsu into Ninjutsu and Mechanical Illusion Arts, the former at B or so, the latter at C++. -Replace Natural Body with Self-Modification. -Remove the anti-demon trait on the first Noble Phantasm, change the range to 0-6 -The second Noble Phantasm shouldn’t be a Reality Marble, but having it be a High Thaumaturgy akin to Nero’s Aestus Domus Aurea is fine. Remove the line about a confusion status and a curse, but you can elaborate on it impeding movement and potentially drowning enemies so long as they believe the illusion.[/hider] [hider=Nanako] -Change Demonic Strength to Oni-kind Demon at rank C (description is 'A Skill that represents the superpower and demonic nature of an oni. It is a composite Skill of the Natural Monster Skill, Monstrous Strength Skill, Charisma Skill, Magical Energy Burst Skill, etc.. In her case, the Magical Energy Burst is that of Flames.') -Change the first Noble Phantasm to rank D, range 0. -For the second Noble Phantasm, change the range to 1-2. The last sentence is also confusing wording, so make sure to note that the ‘chance’ to inflict death is there on the last strike regardless of how many of the previous strikes hit, but that it scales ranks with each hit. You can also note that the ‘killing blow’ can be moved to any point in the combo to give it more flexibility, if you want. [/hider] [hider=Androssi] No changes required. [/hider] [hider=Tlacatecotl] -Attendant of the End doesn’t really work, change or remove it. -Change the comparison to High Speed Divine Words to be closer to High-Speed Incantation, remove the line about requiring more Magic Resistance to overcome. [/hider]