[@Jasper19] I'm only going to ask a couple changes, you did alright! I originally define the phenomenon as happening exclusively at night, but, I'm pretty satisfied with your encounter, so, I'm willing to make an exception. Congrats, if this rp had already started, you'd now be responsible for a retcon :P

I'll go into detail on some changes I'd suggest, in a PM, and award you your WP and such there as well. Don't move your file into the character section, just yet.