Howdy, thanks for applying and all that! [@LukasVolkov] I have a couple quick reviews for both of your characters. [b]Xeno[/b][list] [*]I would really appreciate if you could find a faceclaim to help better visualize. I understand it is difficult, and let me know if you really have nothing, but as they say, a picture is a thousand words. [*]I hate to shoot down ideas, but I'm having a lot of difficulty understanding the "alien" thing. All powers should be centered on a singular theme- "fire manipulation," "metal-bending," "mind-reading," et cetera. I can't really get a good read on your powers from what you've described here. The problem is that your central theme of your power was a one-off, activated thing, which I don't think really fits into the RP well, and I'm afraid I can't fully follow your description of Matthew's psychic power. PM me if you have difficulty understanding what I'm trying to say, I'm trying to give a condensed version to avoid writing a whole essay or anything. [*]This is probably more of a 'me' thing than a 'you' thing, but I don't understand the whole rescue sequence. His line got cut, [i]nobody[/i] saw him, but he managed to contact a rescue crew somehow who couldn't do anything until H.E.R.O. got there? I'm afraid I'm a bit lost in that regard. [/list] [b]Flamenco[/b] It's a cool character and it makes sense to me! If you could get a FC that would be great, but outside of that, I think this character is good! Appreciate your application, if you could just make those changes that would be great! If you need me for whatever reason, I'm available on both the Guild and Discord to chat about characters, powers, the story, or just life in general!