[@Vampiretwilight]

 Bit of critique, but lurking through your most active rps atm, I don't really see that. There's no plot. No substanance. If you need help trying to move things along, it doesnt hurt to plan things with other players/GMs. Other than that, your characters seem like the cookie cutter type with the whole sighing and lip biting for no reason. Atleast give a reason why. If they wanna break up with their respective partners, that can add some conflict. If they have problems with like, family or old friends for example, it can drive the plot forward. 

 Ya get it?