I like it a lot. You've made a really interesting world. So interesting, I can't decide which direction to go in for my character! Do you want to pick for me? Hehe. On one hand I have a low level employee of a LightWorks factory with a gambling addiction who's life felt bleak before the Fracturing but has since been disturbingly invigorated. On the other I have a young farmhand whom has lived outside the city all his life. He's pretty weak but is incredibly resourceful and as a fun quirk he would creatively use domestic magic in ways they weren't intended to be used in order to defend himself.