[@BigPapaBelial] Cool CS. Memories maybe I should of been more specific are like your relations w/ NPC and PCs What you have is still cool. [hider=example] Gammon St. Laurent - One of the oldest and experienced Aeons at the DI's disposal, he was a tough but nurturing teacher and parted many techniques and knowledge to his students. It always felt like he wanted to escape to the neutral territories, perhaps he knew that if he left he'd put his former students at risk and those who dared to follow him. Conrad Yvette-Cortez - My father, while I love him like nothing else in this world he is a loyalist to the union. It wasn't a big deal until I decided to packup and leave my city forever, I coulden't face him and after my mother passed away things had never been the same. Sasha Yvette-Cortez - My mother, she was sweet and loving. She went too early, I didn't know what to do with myself once she was taken from me. I found a calling in flying, and now I'm following my wingman down to the ends of the world to find out what the fuck happened to him. Am I crazy mom? Robert Hernandez - He kept me alive during the rebellion but once he vanished after it, along with his note it made me question everything I had known. My belief were challenged but I had to find out what happened to him, and what connection he has to the rebellion, Foxtrot 11 and maybe even Valkrie herself. 'Vampyr' Squadron - Consisting of myself, Hernandez, Gurman, King & Rose we were the heavy hitters of the air force during the rebellion war. While I was closest to Hernandez I got along well with the others, I'll miss them but it's better if they don't know where I was going. [/hider] Your backstory for Mason is lacking, all I know is he some cute-boy glitter and now he's a power-cuteboy. Where is he from, has he worked in New Brazil? Does he have family, what was his upbringing? Does he have any ambitions? Your power is like o.o Your limitations and weaknesses are lacking there should be either more detail or more of both. I need to consult the Co-GMs on what they think about the power as well, if they are okay with it we'll probably be stacking a few limitations on it. What comes to mind already is prolonged use will melt his clothes and equipment off him and even longer is fatal. Stuff like that, otherwise nice CS but it needs some revisions.