@Nicias Askani Overall, very nice CS. There are only a few small things that needed to be done. 1.) The chakra natures. Would be nice if you would place that he has Lighting, Water and Storm. 2.) I am a bit unsure about the water technique : Water sky convergence. 3.) The skill of : Kenjustu expert: he has studied and trained in the art of kenjutsu 20 years and has nearly mastered the art of dual wielding as well as his special katana. There are few who can rival his skill with a blade Would you mind to remove the last sentence? Its not a competitive RP and though I personally have nothing against it, I do need to ask if you would mind to put it away. Think that the 20 years of kenjutsu training are enough to let somebody know he is very trained/deadly with kenjutsu. ;) 4.) He has sensing transmission, but no sensory jutsu? 5.) Mind to erase the Fire release Stream off the summoning? Once that is done, you have my full acceptance. :)