[hider=OoC] [b]> As a player, what is your preferred writing level? [/b] I write similar to others around me, but a few paragraphs is usual. [b]> Is grammar and depth of writing important to you?[/b] Not particularly but lots of errors start to get bothersome [b]> Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring?[/b] Id like to get better at fights. and action is always a favorite of mine but personality development and relationship building is also fun and important to me. [b]> Is there anything you really dislike and want to avoid like the plague? [/b] Suppose not. [b]> Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character?[/b] Please don't cut off his limbs unless you're willing to pay for his replacements ;-; [b]> Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character? [/b] Short: GET STRONGER! Long: Hopefully achieve Knight or even Master, Through dedication and many many missions. Also I would love for him to train a padawan of his own sometime down the line. But with such ambition comes lots of danger and If he happens to be struck down in battle so be it.[/hider] [hider=Jedi Temple Public Records] [b] Name: [/b]Val'Ko Sate [b] Species: [/b]Human [b] Homeworld: [/b]Dantooine [b] Age: [/b]15 [b] Gender: [/b]Male [b] Rank: [/b]Padawan [b] Master: [/b]Jedi Knight [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/181039-wip-jedi-knight-aren-bec/ooc]Aren Bec[/url] [b] Former Master: [/b]None [b] Known Associates: [/b] Jedi Knight Aren Bec [b] Favored Equipment and clothes: [/b] Jedi Robes of course. As for equipment he carries two lightsabers Purple in blade color, one in each hand. [b] Height: [/b]161cm (5'3") [b] Weight: [/b]58kg (128lbs) [/hider] [hider=Jedi Temple Internal Records] [h3][sub]Detailed appearance. Imagery insufficient. [/sub][/h3] Val'Ko is a human of rather average looks, consisting of a head full of soft light brown hair that has a mind of its own and likes flowing from the front to the back of his head with considerable volume/poof. Hair trimmed close to the scalp around his ears and the back of his head only really letting it grow out on the top, except of course for his Padawan Braid. He has a light Olive skin tone and full, sharp eyebrows. Usually displaying a clean shaven face. His eyes are the color only found between A sage green and aquatic teal with streaks of light brown almost gold. His nose is small and sharp looking just like his lips which draw in a straight line, hiding Straight, remarkable white teeth behind them. Val'Ko has a Lean athletic build being stronger than he looks due to his focus on his physical abilities. He stands about 5'3" or 161cm tall and weighs about 128lbs or 58kg of well built muscle. [hider=Rough Visual Representation of Val'Ko][img]https://i.imgur.com/OgRLkZL.jpg[/img][/hider] [h3][sub]Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill levels. [/sub][/h3] Val'Ko's Natural abilities in the force lie in his ability to augment his movements more so than anything else but of course due to his nature, He has always taken interest in using to force to aid in combat. -Force Speed (Basic) -Telekinesis (Novice) -Force Throw (Basic) -Telekinetic Defense (Novice) -Telepathic Defense (Novice) -Force Sight (Novice) -Mind Trick (Undiscovered Talent) -Force Jump (Basic) -Tutaminis (Novice) [h3][sub]Report on known skills and combat experience, training and lightsaber training. [/sub][/h3] Val'Ko is good at is Survival and stealth infiltration. He likes living for days on the different planets he and his Master travel to and loves any opportunity to take the enemy by surprise. Val'Ko is also an exceptional pilot for his age. He and his Master practically live on their ship, the [i]Pathfinder[/i]. So Val has gotten quite a bit of practice. Val'Ko Has been with his master for a couple years now aiding in quite a number of missions. He has developed quite an aggressive and offensive fighting style utilizing mostly Ataru. -Shii-Cho (Basic) -Ataru (Trained Talent) -Shein (Trained Talent) [h3][sub]Names and pertinent details for all political and social associates. Including allies, enemies, rivals, underlings, apprentices and more. [/sub][/h3] Jedi Master Kyla Vondin - Has met them a few times always marveling over their combat abilities hoping one day to be taught by her. Lo Lya'Tre - A Fellow Padawan Val'Ko has developed a growing friendship with, he enjoys being able to talk to someone his age. [h3][sub]Personality analysis of candidate. [/sub][/h3] He is a high energy, excited disciple of the Jedi Order. He is eager to develop his skills and focuses primarily in Jar'kai. His personality mirrors his fighting style. He is always on the move and can get quite aggressive, never wanting to slow down. He is very adaptable and is a quick thinker able to come up with in the moment solutions even under pressure or stress. Val'Ko is a very brave, Ambitious and Adventurous. Most importantly, He revers all the Jedi above him, Especially his Master and Jedi Master Kyla Vondin. It would be hard for him to disobey their teaching and guidance no matter what is offered in return. Val'Ko loves being on the move, which he shares with his Master, they are always finding some trouble to get into and resolve. Val'Ko loves talking to his Master and prying on her wisdom, slowly Val'Ko is getting more and more interested in the deep connections with the force that his Master has. [h3][sub]List and description of known and suspected flaws, obligations, vices and weaknesses. [/sub][/h3] He is aggressive, and lacks a developed connection to the force. He focuses too much on prowess and would rather train in saber dueling than meditate. He is also rather careless and seems not to care much about important matters. He just enjoys playing and fighting more than politics or negotiations. [h3][sub]Owned equipment of note. [/sub][/h3] His Twin purple Lightsabers. Val'Ko and Master Aren own a Defender-class light corvette, the [i]Pathfinder[/i]. [/hider] [hider=Biographical Records] [h3][sub]Personal biography, as detailed by the candidate for use in Jedi archives. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note. [/sub][/h3] Val'Ko Sate was born on 17.1.8 BTC on on the planet of Dantooine taken from his family just before he turned 5 Years old, Ever since he has been training and getting stronger as a Jedi, He remembers how highly his mother talked about the Jedi and how she told him that if he worked hard enough he too could become a Jedi, So when Val'ko left home he wasn't bothered as much as other children. He thought that was what everyone did. The Jedi lifestyle was much more comfortable than the life he was living with his mother and as he grew he started to enjoy the learning and practice that gave him direction and support. Becoming a Jedi was all Val'Ko ever cared about. Val'ko was the type to learn from failure, and as such it is easier to learn from bruises than bad grades. He tried his best to keep up with the school portions of the training but always excelled at the things such as flying, surviving or what he loved most, Saber technique. Val'Ko spent a lot of time reading about how to fly or fight and made sure he was familiar with how speeders, starships, and most importantly how lightsabers worked. Val'Ko was of course tested by the initiate trials since he has such a narrow focus but nevertheless he passed. The Jedi Code was clearly a part of his heart and mind by age 12 and he made not only one lightsaber but two, since he was provided the materials. He struggled the most on his Trial of Insight but proved he was adaptable and had lots of potential if trained correctly. He has been known to be too rough with other Initiates as if he doesn't know his own strength but his rough housing seems to be of good hearted nature with no ill intent. Val'Ko has been with his master almost 2 years now going on mostly protective details and peaceful relation missions, He keeps his mind open at all times and has learned a lot. He practices his personal skills with any and all free time making sure he doesn't attract the wrong attention. He also enjoys any practice he can get at flying with his Master, always helping with maintenance and repair whenever needed. [/hider]