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[b][color=f26522]Swordfighting  ⫻[/color][/b] [color=f26522]Jess became pretty adept at winning fights with sword-like objects. She was thrilled to find out the real deal isn't really much different. [/color][/quote]

I'm kinda confused because, like, there's no way she can learn actual swordfighting from LARPING (though, to be faaaair a weirdo like her would probably get swordfighting classes). So did she take classes or something?


[quote]He got up and gave her a swift punch in the jaw.[/quote]

Unless she's fighting the world's weakest man (or she can take a punch) this probably should have knocked her out. Trust me. I'm a martial artist myself (and I'm big af lol) and I got socked by people waaaaaaaaay smaller than me and almost got knocked out. I don't really get why she didn't just hit him in the nuts and run off or something. 

Other than that she's pretty okay.