I said I was going to edit it, but I feel it more poignant to make it a separate post instead for reasons.

So, I did the minor updates. We're officially set two weeks after forming the "Breakers"

However...

This is just an idea, but would anybody mind if they weren't actually the "Bulwark Breakers" quite yet? What if we used this retaliation by Doomraisers to set their own goal in stone? Have the first little story beat end on the [i]official[/i] forming of the Bulwark Breakers? For now they're just a nameless group hanging around the old base, and they call themselves a gang without any real name for now.

Of course, that would conflict a bit with some already-accepted characters. I'm specifically thinking of Akane and Shimizu. Therefor, [@Amaranthine] and [@LunarStandard], what would you two think about not actually being a part of the gang yet? Akane only saw something in the breakers because they wanted to get inside the core, but if I change this to only happen after the first story beat, she wouldn't have a reason to join yet. She could be observing this little 'feud' and judging the breakers worth for it.

For Shimizu, since the breakers are aimless and not a direct thread, I would feel she doesn't have any immediate pressing concerns to joining them. She could just be tagging along with the Doomraisers for now so that, in case they do win, they're still out of her hair. Of course she could have also joined up with the Breakers and they'd see her as a traitor for it, but if you go with the former option you at least have an excuse to duel any of the players or Takuma if you wanted to.

I don't think Keita and Kato have much reason to not be a part of Takuma's immediate entourage, though. Depends on what [@PKMNB0Y] and [@webboysurf] think.

[sub][s]also my apologies for this RP being such a mess already from the first post.[/s][/sub]