[@Plank Sinatra] So, you know I love Dana. I loved her in OA and I love her now. And I don't want this to come off as though I don't, so I will say it now: I love Dana. 

Okay for the problems I'm having, which is to say there are only two. Possibly big or small depending on certain factors.

The FC. She seems a little old for 20/21. And yes, I'm aware she was in OA but in OA, there were a lot of extenuating circumstances allowing for kids to appear older. Here, it's not as open (unfortunately). So, I will have to ask, if you have any backup fcs for Dana, preferably those who might appear as though they are a little closer to early 20s, that you change her to that.

And now the second thing. Her color. When compared with [color=8f1900]Bas's color[/color], I think it's a little too similar. You can obviously opt for a lighter shade of red (though still dark) so you can still have the general aesthetic I know Dana is known for.

One last, little thing: you forgot to read the rules. I would overlook them once more. :P

Fix these things and Dana-chan is 100% accepted!