[@Viper Commando] As a follow on from my previous post, since you posted while I was typing. It is generally frowned upon in the community if you post your character into the 'characters' tab and then also decide to post in the IC. If you were to do this in other RPs you would probably find yourself getting banned from them.

P.S. In your IC post you mentioned it was still dusk. But the IC post at the top says that it is 8am, so Dawn. Asides from that, you wrote two decent paragraphs. If you work on writing in third person and being slightly more accurate with your wording, you will be well on your way!