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Sorry for that, filled it in! Totally overlooked that last bit. I also slightly tweaked it, so she's from Dholgrin now, and her father was a dwarf. It fits well, since I already made her quite short, though if Orc/Dwarf relations are not okay within your lore, then lemme know and I can change it! :) 

Hope everything looks good now!
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It's unlikely, but not [i]impossible[/i] I suppose, so I'll allow it lol Definitely a unique circumstance. Anyway, the only thing I noticed was at the very beginning of the first paragraph where it still says human. Other than that, you're good!


Also just as a note, and I'll add this to the 0th post at some point too, just because a country is "the home of the dwarves/humans/elves," it doesn't mean that's there whole population. I feel like that might have gotten a little bit confused, so I just wanna clarify. It's just like in the real world! Countries like China are predominantly Chinese, but there are also Americans, Koreans, French, English, blah blah blah. You get me.