[@Espatier] Firstly, I'm going to insist on fleshing out the backstory and personality a bit more. 

Secondly, I'd like some more specifics on the skills. 

Thirdly, I wouldn't put any animals under equipment. I'd put them under other. And, given the setting, I'd find almost any animal (save perhaps a dog) to be a liability in this situation.

And, this isn't necessary, but it would be preferable if you cleaned up the formatting a bit.

Tweak your CS accordingly, and I'll take another look at it. :sun