[quote=@sassy1085] Here is my Witch! [center][hider=Kate the Rebellious Witch!] [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0MGs-_9hkw] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f3/09/bb/f309bb9de2242dd33ff5b4b39d07b577.jpg [/img][/url] [img]https://txt-dynamic.static.1001fonts.net/txt/dHRmLjEyOC4yN2NmNWMuUzJGMFpTQlRhSFZoYm1jLC4wAAAA/lyhyt-lauantai.regular.png[/img] [color=5df578] [b]Name:[/b] [/color] [i]Kate Shuang [/i] [color=5df578] [b]Gender / Preferred Pronouns:[/b][/color] [i] Non-binary, They/Them [/i] [color=5df578][b]Age:[/b][/color] [i]17 [/i] [color=5df578][b]Birthday:[/b][/color] [i]June 17th [/i] [color=5df578][b]Sexuality:[/b][/color] [i]Bisexual[/i] [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f-LqvtteIeY][img]https://66.media.tumblr.com/eb9b1dfbb1a860652805b66505c704c6/6dfd06d3b3ca6de6-65/s400x600/f0b5d20da1c451a9f770ed681f7e28b68dc3549a.gifv[/img][/url] [color=5df578][b]Appearance:[/b] [/color] [i]Kate stands 5'3" and weight 54kg, they long black hair and dark brown eyes that just have that deadpan look into them, Kate also have a small scar on their shoulder from a little accident while training magic with their aunt. As for Kate wardrobe, Kate usually tends wearing normal clothes but their rebellious personality still blends into it, they wear rock bands and black t-shirts, flannel and blue jeans and they always wear their green camo jackets with pockets. Kate also wear a black collar, bracelet, it was a gift from their mother and couple of rings.[/i] [color=5df578][b]Personality:[/b][/color] [i]Kate is a ambitious trouble-maker that just love make pranks where ever they goes and just love being rebellious toward authority figures. Kate is mostly sarcastic toward everyone they meet but deep down, they just love making new friends and will stay loyal to them no matter what!...But if Someone is a totally ass toward them...then there is going to be a problem.[/i] [color=5df578][b]Biography:[/b][/color] [i]Kate Shuang comes from a long line of witches from China. Every family member before them have been into many coven all over China, but by the time that their mother and auntie were born, their mother, Diu, decided to move into American, Virginia and join The Sisters of the Dying Branch. While there, Diu met her soon-to-be husband, John, they got marry and then they have a little [s]gremlin[/s] child named Kate! While growing up, Kate had always been fascinated by their witch heritage and began to train to be just like them. But, overtime they began to think that they wanted to follow their own path on how to be a witch without being in a coven. When Kate entered school, that was when their rebellious behavior kicked in. They made graffiti art throughout their neighborhood, started sneaking out of their house to go to parties and began to be a real troublemaker at school. Kate feel like there nothing is stopping them....But then, all things go downhill when their aunt, Mei, came in. Aunt Mei and their parents finally noticing Kate troubling behavior and decided to sent them to the coven in to hopes they will give Kate some discipline but also let them learn more new magic. Without listening their choice on the matter, Kate is force to go to The Sisters of the Dying Branch, the mystery coven that they hear about from their mother, will Kate be ready to make some friends and enemies and rebel against the teachers...or will they find something far more sinister? [/i] [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zm8xIo_2Aok][img]https://66.media.tumblr.com/1ed3db3d6a4f9db14dfdd3fd2626714d/tumblr_inline_pkb133IPXp1rmgnb5_540.gif[/img][/url] [color=5df578][b]Notable Rumors:[/b][/color] [i]Kate may or may not almost accidentally burn a house down during a party...It was probably on purpose though[/i] [i]Their mother is undercover witch Their aunt made a pact with a demon[/i] [color=5df578][b]Greatest Fear:[/b][/color] [i]Astraphobia [/i] [color=5df578][b]Magic:[/b][/color] [color=5df578][i]Strong Suit: Potions[/i][/color] When young Kate first discover potions, they thought to themselves [color=5df578]"Huh....I'm going to make a shit ton of pranks"[/color] and after their mother teach them how to make them, they become very skill at it and really love making them. Kate just found potions fascinating cause at first glance, it just color liquid in a bottle but it so much more then that! Every potions are different, they can be helpful, they can be funny, they can be beautiful!...At least to Kate. Kate have notebook of potions in their backpack and a couple of potions are in there too but don't worry, Kate won't use them for pranking....Yet. [color=5df578][i]Strong Suit: Healing magic [/i][/color] While this suit may surprise people, due to the type of person that Kate is, healing is something that Kate really want to try. After Kate mother heal Kate shoulder from the "lightning incident", They thought they can help their friends if they are in danger. [color=5df578][i]Neutral Suit: Charm Magic[/i][/color] Even though Kate is not good at charms, They are not bad at it either. Maybe with a little practice, Kate could trick her enemies....Oh! And help others, I guess. [color=5df578][i]Weak Suit: Divination[/i][/color] Kate thought trying Divination would be fun because it sounds cool! But overtime, Kate found it kinda boring cause it involves looking at people hands all day, where is the fun in that? [color=5df578][i]Weak Suit: Elemental Magic [/i][/color] After the "lightning incident", Kate doesn't want to do anything with elemental magic, their aunt takes the fun out of it. [color=5df578][b]Other:[/b][/color] [i]Kate have a familiar pitbull dog name [url=https://66.media.tumblr.com/846e10b5dc21cc0a6486d0f5f837504f/tumblr_nc32v8dGyA1t7xdhko1_400.gif]Clem.[/url] When Kate was kid, they beg their parents for pet all the time. So by the time they turn eight, their parents bought them a little pitbull dog and the two become buddies ever since.[/i] [i]Kate won't admit it but they just loves cooking! Young Kate and their father would cook all the time back at home and want to make people happy when ever they taste Kate food.[/i] [i]Kate color code is [color=5df578]5df578[/color][/i] [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JDrschw-wdI] [img]https://66.media.tumblr.com/5b1fe4f920a223bb4292f713e3739428/tumblr_inline_pk9lipbuop1rmgnb5_540.gif[/img][/url] [/hider][/center] [/quote] I really love your character sheet! However, I have a few issues with it. 1. [b]The backstory.[/b] This is a small nitpick, but I noticed that you said that their aunt and mother 'sent them off' to the coven to learn more magic. The focus of this roleplay is young witches (witchlings) about to be initiated into the coven. You also said 'teachers'- this is not a school roleplay, although it certainly shares some characteristics with one. I would love if you cleared it up a little! 2. [b]The grammar.[/b] I would love it if you ran your sheet through a service like [url=https://app.grammarly.com/]Grammarly[/url]! With people who use they/them pronouns in the English language, you're supposed to use the third person plural conjugations of verbs instead of the third person singular conjugations, as you did a couple times. This is a common mistake, but I'd love it if you could fix it! Other than this, there are a few mistakes I'd love if you could correct, just to make it a little more readable. [quote=@Melissa] [hider=Maggie Wilson][center][img]https://i.imgur.com/C9skvnX.png[/img] [img]https://fontmeme.com/permalink/200606/16d97b566f2f6720bba9378360b50ba9.png[/img][/center] [color=ACA1CD][b]Name[/b][/color] Margaret "Maggie" Wilson [color=ACA1CD][sub]Don't even think about calling her Margaret...[/sub][/color] [color=ACA1CD][b]Gender/Preferred Pronouns[/b][/color] Female, She/Her [color=ACA1CD][b]Age[/b][/color] 17 [color=ACA1CD][b]Birthday[/b][/color] March 21 [color=ACA1CD][b]Sexuality[/b][/color] Heterosexual [color=ACA1CD][b]Appearance[/b][/color] To sum it up in one word, Maggie can be best described as dainty. Standing at 5'4" with a slender build, her features and stature are reminiscent of her delicate nature- a small sloping nose, high cheek bones, and full lips with corners that are often upturned in a smirk. Her shoulder length hair currently resembles the color of wheat, with dark roots that reveal her natural coloring. Her doe like blue eyes are striking and capture your attention, while her arched eyebrows frame her feminine face. The blonde routinely wears neutrals such as black, white, brown, and beige, or pastels such as light pinks and light blues. She also enjoys a pop of color now and again. Her wardrobe mostly consists of sweaters, cardigans, skirts and flowy dresses. [color=ACA1CD][b]Personality[/b][/color] Maggie is a quiet, but thoughtful and considerate person. An introvert at heart, the blonde often keeps to herself by reading books and practicing spells on her own. She tends to steer clear of overly boisterous and abrasive company, but nonetheless is not too selective when it comes to who her friends are. A shyer soul, she'll be pretty reserved around those she does not know as well, but once you get to know her, she is talkative, friendly, and incredibly easygoing. Faithful and honest, Maggie is true to her friends and the ones that she cares about, even if its to her own detriment sometimes. Even though she may be shy, that doesn't mean Maggie isn't strong-willed. She has a good head on her shoulders and a intuitive sense of right and wrong. One could even say she's stubborn when it comes to what she believes in and her motives towards certain aspects of her life. You'd be surprised that quiet Maggie has a fiery temper, and it's not one that most people get to see. This is due to the fact she has a tendency to hold in her adverse thoughts and feelings only to erupt and let it all go in solitude. [color=ACA1CD][b]Biography[/b][/color] Maggie's family has been associated with the Sisters of the Dying Branch for generations. Her ancestors on her father's side came to America from Scotland and settled down in neighboring Maryland. They associated with the coven quickly, finding solace in likeminded witches, and begun to devote their lives to the elders and the like. Her mother's side was American through and through, residing in Virginia since the beginning of time. Maggie's father met her mother in the coven and they had a love story like no other, resulting in the birth of her older brother Brent and eventually her. Maggie was raised in a home with an abundance of love and support from her parents. She led a "normal" childhood, attending public school alongside Brent and getting a well rounded education. She was exposed to her heritage at a young age- making the hour and something trip every month to the coven alongside her family gave her parents the chance to tell the children countless stories and explanations regarding their involvement with the Sisters of the Dying Branch. Now, at 17, Maggie is ready to grasp hold of her future and devote herself to the coven like her parents did and those did before her. [color=ACA1CD][b]Notable Rumors[/b][/color] It was rumored that Maggie got so angry once that she shattered a window by throwing one of her books at it in a sheer rage. Most people didn't think the quiet had it in her, so it was passed over quickly as hearsay. [color=ACA1CD][sub]However, this rumor is in fact true- she had to pay for the replacement glass herself.[/sub][/color] [color=ACA1CD][b]Fears[/b][/color] She is deathly afraid of spiders, no matter how small or unassuming they may appear. Her parents say its a foolish fear, but nonetheless, it's something that Maggie has never been able to shake. [color=ACA1CD][b]Magic[/b][/color] Maggie's greatest strength is potions. Something about mixing the exact measures of each ingredient is therapeutic to the blonde, and although the process is time consuming she enjoys nothing more than a quiet afternoon in the kitchen throwing potions, elixirs and remedies together. She possesses the delicate care necessary to create different concoctions successfully, which allows her to excel in this area. Additionally, Maggie is quite proficient in healing magic and enjoys using her abilities to help others. [color=ACA1CD][b]Other[/b][/color] FC: Malijn Pieterse | [color=ACA1CD]ACA1CD[/color] Font: Font Meme Red Velvet [/hider] [/quote] I really like Maggie! You can go ahead and put her in the character tab.