[@Crab Bane] So she's Daisy-023?

Either way looks fine aside from one issue. "Her parents immigrated from the WDU before she was born"

The WDU didn't exist before she was born. It was formed after the war ended, so she would have been at least 3 years old by time it was created.

Other than that one thing I only ask that you separate each line so it's not a big single chunk of text. Obviously not a big deal, just my eyes.