[@Lucius Cypher] Everything looks good, but just a quick note. The Brotherhood at least by the start of the RP are mounting an expedition to North Carolina, if you want to be down there at the time of that. That's fine, though if you want she could have been one of the Knight's to volunteer to join the expedition after her unit arrived at Citadel in the Capital Wasteland. 

As her own experience traveling would make her probably one more veteran knights and more experienced people within the the Brotherhood. If you want her at the Citadel she'd probably be given the rank Knight Sergeant to show her veteran status.

Just thoughts, I really like the sheet though great job!