[hider=My Review in Blue] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/fc1w3ge.jpg?2[/img] [color=f49ac2]Name:[/color] Bébé Pottle [color=f49ac2]Age:[/color] 21 [color=f49ac2]Guild Mark Location:[/color] Ankle on her left foot. [color=f49ac2]Magic Type:[/color] [color=cyan]Already your formatting is incompatible with my review style, but don't worry I still read the parts that end up snipped. Sleep Magic has me a little sus.[/color] [hider=Spells] [b][i][color=f49ac2]Sleep Magic[/color][/i][/b] [color=silver]Sleep Dust:[/color] With a flick of her hand, Bébé can release a spritz of glittering dust at her target, putting them to sleep. The range on this spell is short, so she has to be right in front of someone. [color=cyan]Fair.[/color] [img]https://i.imgur.com/KiqR8ON.png[/img] [color=silver]Dream Knock:[/color] The user creates bubble-like bullets that rush towards the opponent and immediately induces sleep upon impact. [color=cyan]A little less fair, but still reasonable.[/color] [img]https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/fairytail/images/e/ec/Dream_Knock.gif/revision/latest?cb=20111216184442[/img] [color=silver]Self-Hypnosis; Preservation :[/color] This spell allows Bébé to put herself to sleep. While under the trance of her self-induced sleep, she gains a subconscious sixth sense that makes her extremely evasive, acrobatic, and elusive. Her sleepwalking mode grants her supernatural self-preservation, allowing her to identify and escape danger without consciously thinking out a plan of action. For example, if she were being pursued by enemies faster than her, her subconscious instincts would drag her body to just the right spot to avoid getting surrounded, cut off, or captured. This magic is [color=cyan]you probably meant "isn't"[/color] perfect, but it is highly effective. She can wake herself up, but in doing so, immediately loses the the supernatural self-preservation. [color=cyan]A little unclear on if it boosts her agility or if it just allows her to maximize what she has. I'd appreciate a little further clarification.[/color] [color=silver]Dream Visitor:[/color] This spell conjures a bubble like sphere that she releases into the air. She can command this bubble to float to someone, even over long distances just by thinking of them. If that person is asleep when the bubble touches them, it allows Bébé to visit that person in their dreams. Though she cannot control their dreams or nightmares, she can remain hidden and invisible, or interact and communicate with them in their dreamworld. [color=cyan]So the obvious questions I have to ask are if she can harm her victim through dream interactions and if she can boost or otherwise alter her physical capabilities (since dreams are notoriously unrealistic)?[/color] [color=silver]Dream Stealer:[/color] After leaving someone's dream/nightmare, this spell allows Bébé to capture their dream or nightmare within the bubble and bring it back to her. She can then store this "Dream Bubble" for later use. Upon popping a "Dream Bubble", she releases that person's nightmare/dream into her immediate vicinity as a very realistic illusion. However, once she uses a "Dream Bubble", she cannot reuse it again [color=cyan]I would assume, from the bubble popping[/color]. The illusion is most effective against the person from whom she stole it from. [/hider] [color=f49ac2]Magic Rank:[/color] C [color=f49ac2]Equipment:[/color] [color=silver]Dream Journal:[/color] A journal she carries around with her to write and draw her dreams. [color=cyan]nerd[/color] [color=silver]Elune:[/color] This is a magic quill pen. It floats about and writes on its own, generally writing or drawing what Bébé subconsciously wants it to without having to verbally command it to do so. [color=cyan]double nerd[/color] [color=silver]Portable telescope:[/color] A portable telescope she keeps strapped to her back for stargazing. [color=cyan]triple nerd[/color] [color=f49ac2]Strengths:[/color] [color=silver]Brave;[/color] Don't be fooled by her dainty exterior. Bébé [color=cyan]I'm gonna hate writing this name because you just had to put two accents in it[/color] is like a lion; courageous, headstrong, and unafraid to jump head first into an otherwise dangerous or dirty situation. She's a plucky and valiant little thing, not willing to let circumstances deter her from her passions and dreams. [color=silver]Artist;[/color] A talent she developed at a young age after constantly sketching in her journals, Bébé can draw extremely well. Though she generally sticks to sketching, she is a magnificent painter as well. [color=silver]Good Judge of Character;[/color] Despite being stuck within the gates of the circus for most of her life, she met many many different types of people from all over Fiore, unlike many people who are only familiar with people from their hometowns. Because of this exposure to so many different types of people, she's become rather perceptive to the different types of people and personalities that exist. She's a pretty good judge of character. [color=f49ac2]Weaknesses:[/color] [color=silver]Hand-to-Hand Combat;[/color] She's not a really good combatant with hand-to-hand combat. Will have to be trained from bottom up. [color=silver]Claustrophobic;[/color] Bébé can become claustrophobic in really small enclosed spaces, causing panic attacks. This is one of the very few things that can break her typical visage. [color=silver]Lost in her own world;[/color] Bébé is prone to getting lost in her own dreams and desires, sometimes to the detriment of others. She gets really passionate and single focused on things, which isn't always a good thing. She can become a bit reckless and some of her ideas probably aren't the safest or most practical. [color=f49ac2]Personality:[/color] Despite her lovely and delicate disposition, Bébé is a woman who is bohemian [color=cyan]Bohemia doesn't exist in Fairy Tail lel[/color] and carefree. Behind her benign smile belies an individual with a keen sense of self-worth and spunk (it's rare that her feelings get hurt). A woman of wanderlust and a free spirit, she goes where the wind takes her and doesn't like to remain in one place for too long, less she become timid and claustrophobic. She is infinitely imbued with a sense of wonder [color=cyan]personally I think ft was a better OP[/color] and discovery, scared of little and daring to do even the dirtiest of work. She doesn't like to get bogged down by the harsh realities of the world and can often become disinterested in things that kill her "vibe". Bébé is dreamy and romantic, and likes things that are eclectic, unorthodox, and strange. Even under the bleakest of circumstances, she rarely shows her own discomfort and suffering, opting to hide her pain behind a wistful expression. Some might refer to her as a hippie and a bit lazy, with her proclivity for napping, dreamlike countenance, and gaze like she's lost in a daydream. To be fair, she is a bit flighty and irresponsible due to her tendency to become consumed by her own desires and passions, sometimes at the expense of others. Despite this, she's a very sweet girl, and is good natured. The results just don't always add up. Also, she loves to nap. Did I mention that? [color=cyan]Yes.[/color] She can take a nap pretty much anywhere. [color=f49ac2]History/Bio:[/color] The Star Circus. Ever heard of it? [color=cyan]No.[/color] As the name suggests, the Star Circus is a circus of performing independent mages; a circus that only appears under the starry nights of Fiore. This circus is mysterious and elusive, hidden in the shadows of the sun until the song of the moon and the stars beckon its appearance once more, like a moonlight mirage in the distance. No one knows when the Star Circus will arrive or where it will appear next. The only telltale of its imminent arrival is by the appearance of strange letters upon every doorstep in the nearest city. Will you heed the call of the circus? Aside from the performances and the beautiful tents and wondrous displays of magic, the Star Circus is famous for one other thing; the selling of stars. Yes, yes, they indeed sell stars to their guests and patrons. The Star Merchants, as they have come to be called, sell all manner of stars and for all matters of peculiarities. Lost stars, fallen stars, stars stored in jars, stars strung along chains to ward off evil magic, stardust for cakes that will bring the eater good luck, stars fragmented and shared to to ones lover for eternal love; but the rarest of their wares were the wishing stars, able to grant wishes to those who were lucky enough to obtain one. Wishful dreamers came from all over Fiore, hoping to get their hands on one of these rare and fabled stars, yet the acquisition of such a magical object was so rare that not even the Star Merchants can be certain when they will have another one ready. It has been 250 years since the last wishing star was sold, many generations of Star Merchants having passed without so much the smell of one, let alone the sight or touch of its composition. No one knows when there will be another wishing star, and most have come to believe them to be nothing but the fable of some cooky Star Merchant's imagination. Only the truest believers believe that the wishing stars are real. [color=cyan]I'm sure this won't come up again later.[/color] Within the gilded gates of this traveling circus is where the heart of the truest believer begins, the story of Bébé Pottle. Bébé has two mothers, Sybil and Timothalé [color=cyan]you like accent marks, don't you[/color]. Naturally, she has a father as well, but he was out of the picture long before she could consciously perceive the world around her. As the only child to Sybil and Timothalé, Bébé lived a rather sheltered life, and like a bird in a large golden cage, she was never allowed to leave the safety of the circus. She grew up hearing the tales of the wishing stars during her youth from her fellow circus folk family, but was assured that these were nothing but tales of fiction meant to allure the presence of patrons. But something about those stories of wishing stars and the wishes they granted pulled at her heart and her spirit. Within the crevices of her soul, she knew they were real. [color=cyan]I could think of a few particular characters that would literally kill for one of these.[/color] After she was old enough to begin practicing her own magic, Bébé began showcasing her own attraction in the Star Circus. Her tent, Mer de rêves (Sea of Dreams), brought the dreams of her patrons to life. Her performance became a popular attraction within the Star Circus, but she grew tired of her life as a simple circus performer. She grew tired of her life within the golden cage. She wanted more. She dreamed of more. She dreamed of finding a wishing star, to prove their existence. She spent so much of her time stargazing and daydreaming, and drawing in her journals which stacked to the ceiling, drawings of peoples dreams and nightmares, and of the stars. But most importantly, the wishing star. Over and over and over, she drew pictures of the wishing star, its shape and size and color ever changing, but it was always the wishing star, and it was always the brightest of them all. After Bébé came of age, she was no longer bound to the confines of the circus. She would set out on the world and truly experience it in a way that she had never been allowed to when she lived in the Star Circus. With her cat Blank and her quirky grandfather Ollivander (one of the only people who also believed in the tale of the wishing star [color=cyan]and one of the only people without accents in her circus[/color]), they would set out [color=cyan]to[/color] uncover the mysteries of the wishing star and find these lost relics of time and wonder and dreams. Eventually, through peculiar circumstances, Bébé and Ollivander would end up as members [color=cyan]of[/color] Fenixtear. Though truthfully, it's more like Fenixtear is providing Bébé and her grandfather with a level of protection and security since a really tiny and obscure dark guild called Starless (their entire existence revolves around the Star Circus. They've been following the Star Circus for centuries in hopes of getting their hands on one of the fabled wishing stars.) They sent some of their mages to capture Bébé and her grandfather, but were rescued by Fenixtear. Afterwards, she became a member and has remained loyal to the guild since, though how long will it be before the call of the world beckons her? How long can she stay put before she feels liked a caged bird again in need to be set free? [color=cyan]hopefully a while[/color] [color=f49ac2]Extra:[/color] Has a pet cat named [color=silver][b]Blank[/b][/color]. She is also very fond of stargazing. Her grandfather, [color=silver][b]Ollivander[/b][/color], continues his work as a Star Merchant and sells stars to the benefit and profit of Fenixtear. [hider=Family] [color=silver][b]Blank (Pet)[/b][/color] [img]https://i.imgur.com/RXoXGuD.jpg[/img] [color=silver][b]Ollivander (Grandfather)[/b][/color] [img]https://i.imgur.com/sdzBdMy.jpg[/img] [color=silver][b]Sybil (Biological Mother) [/b][/color] [img]https://i.imgur.com/7awXWvO.jpg[/img] [color=silver][b]Timothalé (Mother)[/b][/color] [img]https://i.imgur.com/XFXk4Ut.jpg[/img] [/hider] [/center] [color=cyan]I was initially skeptical of the Sleep Magic but after looking through the spells I've decided it's fine. I just need some clarification on a couple of them. Likewise the rest of the sheet is fine too, though I might have to ask you later to create a barebones NPC sheet for Ollivander if he's going to be often relevant in the IC. Clear things up in the spell list where I was confused and you'll be good to move the sheet over to the character tab, though you won't be able to post in the IC just yet. Also feel free to join the Discord through the link in the first OOC post to make communication easier since that's where most of us hang out.[/color][/hider] [@Aeolian]