Great!  :)   I generalized the language in the IC to leave it open for you to make your character's intro how you see fit:  

[quote=@Kelewen]
[i]There are others scattered around the room besides the saloonkeeper and the poker players: 2 men playing pool, a man at the piano, plus 4 roughnecks at the bar (there'd been 5 before Mary's would-be suitor left with a bloodied nose) and 4 at the second table, one of which glances over at the poker game every once in awhile.[/i]
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