[@Crimson Flame] and [@baraquiel] Both look good to me. You can move Tikaani and Hinra over to the character section.

[@BigPapaBelial] One thing, if there wasn't an age limit, you think you'd want to make Seung older? His accomplishments are really cool, but I think having done all that as a sixteen year old is a lot (not uncommon if you're a passionate teen) and that it might make more sense to push up his age in order to have a more fitting timeline just for his backstory.