[@Achronum] Looks gucci, accepted.

[@Gisk] Overall it looks fine. My only note is that there is not only one Fellowship for scientists or prostitutes. Think of them like union chapters, they can become rather specific. The scientist's Fellowship might be for whatever particular branch of science she studies, biologists perhaps, and the other sisters' might be something like "Fellowship of the Sisters of Silk." A minor point, but this information wasn't available to you previously.

[@Crusader Lord] I use that description to mean that it is a field that has not had much work done in it yet, and those engaging in its research are among the most innovative and respected Sorcerers in the Heka. Returning to my old analogy, your characters are freshman physics undergrads, and something like Death Magic is like using the Hubble to look for exoplanets. Suffice to say, if I've dubbed something too advanced for your characters at the moment, just put it out of your mind.