[@desdamin] I edited the areas you mentioned, having Nobuo a contender for the title of Clan head and therefore Kiyoshi as a [i]possible[/i] heir to the title. Also, instead of being forced into the training, Kiyoshi did it himself though he still has the minor fear of the dark. Furthermore, I removed the part about Kaede being put in the branch family and fixed the Jutsu and supplies.