That took a lot longer then I had planned to edit and fix up. Hope Im not too late to fix my application, been busy IRL but I finished it up. Had to rewrite a lot with this, ended up tossing out a lot of the orginal character idea this was, but for the most part it should be done now. The magic might be a bit much but the idea was better for me to work with rather then what I was trying to redo with the Crystal Maker magic. But the changes are finished and here is the end result. [hider=Bakuto Hokori] [center][hider=Image][img]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/ff/c8/e3/ffc8e34a3bad3a30ec43b1cb7bf1a622.jpg[/img][/hider][/center] [center][h1][b][color=gold]Bakuto the Crystal Maker[/color][/b][/h1][/center] [color=gold][b]Name:[/b][/color] [indent]Bakuto Hokori[/indent] [color=gold][b]Age:[/b][/color] [indent]23[/indent] [color=gold][b]Guild Mark Location:[/b][/color] [indent]On his back right between his shoulders[/indent] [color=gold][b]Magic Type:[/b] [/color] Storm Caller [indent]The magic and power to control elements of storms. Using elements of certain weather phenomena. Example a Lightning storm, controlling the rain, wind and lightning of a basic lightning storm to do what they want. To learn the magic of the storm caller, the user must first find a Tome of the Storm Callers. These books to ordinary people are just plain books, to normal wizards they can see the power of these books but without a knack for storm calling magic they are useless. Much similar to celestial wizard keys these are the main backbone of the Storm Callers magic. When a storm caller reads the Tomes they get overwhelmed by tones of knowledge in an instant. Learned what these is within the type of storm and acknowledging the basics of what the storm can do. While it does take a bit for the Storm Callers actual gain control over the spells the storms they have control over but they have access to the full range of powers that the storms in the tomes control. Once read the tomes disappear and reappear somewhere else in the world waiting for someone else to read them. It takes six months to gain any control into crafting actual spells for dedicated storm callers. Some take nearly a whole year. There are multiple types of Storm Tomes, as there are many types of storms. A Storm Caller can learn multiple types of storms but can only be using one set of spells at a time. It is costly to switch between spell types, but Storm callers must do this if they want to use their knowledge of the other tomes. Bakutos current storm types Lightning Storm - This came for the Tomb of Lightning Storms. Granting Bakuto the ability to use the power of a lightning storm with his magic. This mostly is rain, wind and most prominently lightning are his spells while using this tomb of knowledge. Winter Storm The other tome Bakuto found is the Tomb of the Winter Storm. On the contrast to the lightning storm, while sharing similar properties this deals with cold temperatures, snow, wind and ice.[/indent] [color=gold][b]Spells: [/b][/color] Lightning Storm Spells [indent]Passive ability with this Bakuto is resistant to electric attacks. Summon Rain- As the spell says it summons rain. it doesnt do much more other the summons rain from a storm. The lightning storm tomb deals more in lightning then rain so Bakuto cannot do much more with the rain then just make it rain. This is normally used to set up Create Storm Cloud- Makes and summons a storm cloud that acts on its own. Bakuto has no inital control over the storm cloud. Lightning Strike- Conjuring a lightning bolt from his hands, then leting it lash out in a single strike of lighting. Bakuto can throw lightning bolts at people from his hands. A singler strike that he can accurately using to hit pin point spots. Lightning Barrage- A more advance form of the lightning strike. Conjuring lightning bolts from his body. Multiple lightning bolts lash out at random towards whatever direction he is pointing. The control is removed for a more aggressive barrage and flurry of lightning bolts. All varying in different powers and strengths and hitting all over in random. Lightning javelin/Sword- This is is once again a singliar attack, instead of launching a bolt of lighting, Bakuto's arm turns into a Javelin which he can use to fight with like a sword. Or he can using the entire power into a super charged punch which launches the javelin out spearing whatever is in front of his hand at the time. Lightning Charge Boost- This spell is a work in progress, for Bakuto, but essentally it is a two step spell that requires cloud cover to work. He throws a super charged lightning strike into the sky, normally into his own storm clouds. Then the second stage the lightning bolt strikes Bakuto back charging him up with the power he just struck into the clouds and doubling his own electic power and speed. This charge lets Bakuto move at great speeds for a short period of time. Turning his personal strikes into lighting based attacks, but it is an extreme double edge sword. While it gives him the speed and lighting based attacks with his physical combat. It using his own magic doubling his own magic going past its own limits. It both damages Bakuto and only lasts ten minutes before the power leaves him then he becomes paralyzed from a sudden lack of power. Giving Bakuto temporary magic Deficiency syndrome leaving him very vulnerable for attacks.[/indent] [hr] [indent]Storm Caller Spell Tome Shift- This spell is the spell Bakuto must use to switch between his two different storm types. Bakuto cannot use both the Winter Storms and Lightning Storms at the same time. This spell switches the knowledge of the tomes letting Bakuto switch between tome types. Sort of like re-equip the knowledge in his own brain. But this is done to an extreme to completely suppress one storm power and unleashing the other. This spell uses half of the current maximum power at the type when the spell is cast. Leaving the user to have to recover or be really down with available magic power should he need to do battle right after.[/indent] [hr] Winter Storm Spells [indent]Passive for these spells is Bakuto is nearly immune to sub zero temperatures. Snowfall- This spell makes snowfall appear where Bakuto wants it. Making a mixture of water, ice into a flurry of snow. Snowball- Creating a ball of snow unlike a harmless snowball this can be hurdled at people at great speeds, and the snow balls are almost as hard as a steel ball, but very light. A variant to this a a Snow cannonball this is much bigger, but heavier fires forward as if it was launched from a cannon. The normal ones are just the size of the palms of his hands Blizzard Barrage- Using the spell to throw forward a barrage of snow, wind and water at someone. Frostbite combat- This makes Bakuto's punches and physical combat attacks very cold to the point that he can give someone frostbite just by punching them. Freezing the air as he punches. Turning the water air into ice, or if he punches water turning it into ice as well. Temperature drop- this is an area effect spell Bakuto can rapidly drop the temperature around himself from a fifty foot radius. He can drop the temperature to zero. Takes a minute to fully cast the spell[/indent] [color=gold][b]Magic Rank:[/b][/color] [indent]B+[/indent] [color=gold][b]Equipment:[/b] [/color] [indent]None[/indent] [color=gold][b]Strengths:[/b][/color] [indent]Excels at focusing on ranges This strength, if Bakuto is focusing on long range then he excels at long range. If he is focusing on close combat then his skills in close combat will excel. Close combat he can face off against other close combat users and long-range users if he is up close. If he is focusing on long-range then his ranged spells get more precise Quick on his feet- Bakuto is quick at moving and changing things up. Between casting spells, Bakuto can quickly shift how he attacks and moves when he isnt casting spells. Overwhelming spells- The storm spells normally use wide range spells, normally overwhelming people in a wide range. difficult to dodge, but when his spells get more focused the overwhelming wide range spells become true like spears nearly able to punch nearly anything.[/indent] - [color=gold][b]Weaknesses:[/b][/color] [indent]Range Focusing- While in his strengths this is also is a weakness. While he can excel at one range at a time, he drastically loses his strengths in the other ranges. If he is focusing on long range, then close combat will suffer greatly. The same is the other away around if he is focusing on close combat then his long range spells suffer. The same with his defenses. Must finish Casting Spells- This weakness, Bakuto must finish casting one spell before he can cast another. If he casts a lightning bolt, the attack must finish before he can use another. Casting his 'summon' spells the inital casting must finish before he can use another spell as well. This leaves him open slightly between when he cast spells Costly Magic- His powers use a lot of magic, quickly burning off a lot of his magic power. Using more of his spells quickly can lead to reaching his own limits pretty quickly.[/indent] [color=gold][b]Personality: [/b][/color] [indent]Highly energetic, hot head, and idiot are words that descirbe Bakuto generally personality. While his persoanlity is abit more the that but those are the general traits he has. Bakuto's first trait being highly energetic he is full of energy and is ready to get any job down. To some his energy could be exhausting, as he goes to the points where he cannot focus on anything. He also is prone to get into a lot of fights as he likes fighting, he doesnt like being wrong which often leads him to being called a hot head at times. As for him being an idot he often doesnt make smart choices. Bakuto is trying to find the place he truly belongs so he can further develop his magical skills[/indent] [color=gold][b]History/Bio:[/b] [/color] [hider=History][indent]Bakuto was born in the far outskirts of Hargeon. He never knew who his parents were he was raised by an old hermit who was also his original magic master. The old Hermit found Bakuto in a basket floating down a river, and he took him in. The hermit was a 'Weather man' controlling the weather through spells. In some old-time this hermit would go to places within Ishgar giving people weather changes that they needed for their villages. The Weather Man Hermit was a master of the Storm Calling magic on a such a degree mastering hundreds of different Storms. This was the strongest person Bakuto had ever known for the longest time. But the old man always reminded Bakuto that he wasnt the strongest wizard. Always talking about magic guilds talking about long past forgotten things telling Bakuto that he should join a guild if he wanted to see stronger wizards, but Bakuto was content with sticking with his master. During his time with the old hermit, Bakuto was given his first Storm tome the age of thirteen. The Tome of Lightning Storms, after a bit of studying for years prior Bakuto got attuned to become a Storm Caller Wizard and was able to aquire the knowledge within the tome. But he was overwhelmed by the book's knowledge it put Bakuto in a paralyzed but conscious stat where he could see, hear and feel everything around him but he couldnt move. This lasted for a week and this was the most terrible week for Bakuto as during this time his master was attacked by another much younger storm caller wizard. The wizard was after the tomes Bakuto's master had in his possession, wanting the knowledge off all the spells he could possibly use. The young storm caller wanting the power to crush everyone with the ultimate power of the storms. The old hermit refused to hand his tomes over just because he didnt 'like' the man. From sensing the malicious intent in this antagonistic Storm caller and not wanting to give the power of storms to this man. The young storm caller attacked the Weather man Hermit he was going to kill him and take all the Storm Tomes.. The two fought, the young man had youth on his side, while the old hermit had experience and knowledge with over hundred different storms. The battle was like two titans colliding for a full day and night. Hurricanes, fire storms, sand storms and other storms collided between the two wizards. Most notably the young storm caller used an Acid rain storm and a volcanic storm, extreme element to cause destruction. The weather man hermit had to fight while trying to protect his student who was unable to move using high winds and fire to put an end to the younger wizards spells.. Constantly switching between different storm types, put a toll on both wizards. During this fight, the old man knew he couldn't prevent this younger mage from getting a hold of the spell tomes. Instead of letting him get them, the old hermit used a wind spell and sent nearly all of his tomes flying far far away The younger wizard was angry that he couldn't get the tomes and resorted to using forbidden 'lost' storms. His pride was hurt from being unable defeat an old man so he as going to put his life at the cost to kill this old man. It was a Bane Magic storm, a spell that takes the user's life to bring a wave of bane particles, that would surely kill everyone caught in them. The Weatherman hermit used the last bit of his magic to create an updraft of wind to send the storm cloud of bane particles up high up into the sky and away from anyone. The young wizard disappeared after the spell almost as if he became that cloud, and the old hermit sent it high up so it couldnt affect anyone and so it could be easily thinned out by the air. The hermit couldnt avoid breathing in the bane particales himself but he stopped it from affecting Bakuto. Bakuto regained the ability to move a few days later, but his master was dying quickly and painfully. Bakuto could do nothing but help ease his masters pain as he slowly died. On his death bed his master told Bakuto to go join a guild and further develop his talents. Revealing he still had one tome that didnt get blasted away with the others this was the last thing given to Bakuto before his master passed away. The Winter Storm tome, time would pass Bakuto would bounce around between other guilds. He learned and acquired the winter storm knowledge three years after his master's death. Bakuto was in Blue Pegasus for a few years, but he couldnt fit in that old guild. Bakuto wasnt the kind of guy that would fit in at Blue Pegasus, and he tried but eventually he had a falling out. Eventually he found his way to Fenixtear, he hasnt been around long, its been about a month or two since he joined. Bakuto is still trying to find the place he belongs to, not really sure if he found the right guild. Wanting to live up to his masters final wish to join a guild and to further his own magical talents. Fenixtear is the next chapter of his life and it begins now.[/indent][/hider] [color=gold][b]Extra:[/b][/color] [indent]No Extra[/indent][/hider]