[quote=@KZOMBI3]
Evaluation and critic is one thing, but to change words up just because that's what [i]you[/i] want to see. That's just fucking rude. Just saying.
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What if...it's not for the critic's benefit. But meant to benefit the writer? 

Is it really the same thing? Does context not matter at all when it comes to providing critique?

I mean, I'm hearing arguments for why you [b][color=ed1c24]can[/color][/b] tell someone what to change, and [b][color=ed1c24]why[/color][/b] they should change it.

But the mere horrifying act, (of walking the walk) and providing examples of the former things, is the one true sin?
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So, "Your writing is slowly paced" is fine.
 
Even saying. "You should cut all this unneeded shit out, because it's making this one topic drag." is a-okay.

But, do it for them, merely to express how one *can* go about fixing their work? (If they so happen to agree with what you said.) Fucking rudest shit I've ever seen. 

[i]I guess?[/i]