[quote=@vancexentan]
[@DruSM157]Any comment on Allen? I already sent you the rest of his details via pm.
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Alright, I can give some initial impressions since you asked:

[*]The name: Evillious is a little on the nose. Look for other languages usage of evil to make a less "on the nose" last name. For example, "Malcio, Malumon," both use the romantic "malum" as a base (also seen in French, Italian and Spanish) for bad/evil. 

[*]He's a North American, so why is he going to the school in Japan? If his family works in medicine, the connection to the Research Hospital would be good, so think about going further into that with your backstory. Is there anyone else who has influenced his life for this interest? 

[*]Fencing as a sport is fine, but he shouldn't carry a practice sword anywhere but to practice. That's a good way to get in trouble, even in videogame based RP world. 

[*]His Arcana is the Hierophant, which is interesting because he's fairly young. Usually, the Hierophant arcana would be an older figure. There's also a lot going on with his personality: mature and childishness is one I struggle with.   

[*]I think the biggest issue with the CS is that right now it's unfocused. I'd suggest reworking the backstory and really looking at the personality to figure out how this character is. 

There's still a lot of time to work on the CS, since the OOC has only been up for a few hours. Just take some time and look back over it to see what you really want to stand out about this character.