[quote]I sent you the pm going over his details regarding my full backstory. Allen has his mother, and butler for inspiration. His sister who keeps him grounded, and he deeply hates his father. [b]Regarding the hospital I can have his father helping overseeing its processes which is why he, and his father would be in Japan.[/b] I already stated he is often prone to travelling from one place to another due to his father dragging him along with him everywhere.[/quote]

No. 

[quote]Allen doesn't carry his sword everywhere you asked for equipment I put it there for reference. [b]For out of school activities he keeps the pocket knife on him, usually in his back pack, for protection as he knows even self defense training only gets you so far.[/b] If its an issue to have in school I can just bring it with him on off days when school isn't an issue.[/quote]

No. 

[quote]Allen is a highly mature individual. He doesn't mess around, and is very practical. However he can be childish if he's pushed into doing something he's not comfortable with. Adults also have this issue depending on what their upbringing is. For example if Allen takes someone on a date he's a good upstanding gentleman about it. If they ask for a kiss he's going to start stammering, or get nervous. He's confident in the face of danger but he's also unsettled by it. He can courageous but still feel uncomfortable.

I'm pretty sure I addressed most of the issues you have regarding my character. 
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Characters are complex and have contradicting traits but in this case it feels like you're writings thing and adding them in for the sake of wanting him to be everything instead of letting him be organic. This roleplay is based more off of Persona 4--a bunch of ordinary high school kids getting into an adventure where the focus is character development--and this character isn't matching the tone we are looking for. Nothing in the backstory sounds like any defining moment and there is nothing that would indicate his 'goal' of being a hero. Generally speaking, the CS is unfocused and leans heavily towards a Gary Stu instead of coming off as a genuine character.

You addressed the issues. They're still issues.