I've added this above my post:

[h1]This post is being reworked and the events detailed below are not final. Please refrain from replying until the all clear has been given in the OOC.[/h1]

I won't have time to work on it tonight because I'll be at work, but I'll get the rewrite done tomorrow morning if I can and get it posted. I'm really sorry, everyone. It wasn't my intention to force anyone's character into something they weren't comfortable with.