Great entries everyone, you all did great. My vote goes to Dreams Short and sweet, despair and hope. A lot was caught in the short poem. Well done. I can't pick a runner up as that place would be tied between several but Dreams stood out for me, so that one gets my vote. [hider=[@SleepingSilence]] Well, yes. Since capitalization (and punctuation) isn't necessary for a haiku and is pretty much up to the poet I chose to capitalize the second sentence. So actually line 1&3 weren't missing capitalization, line 2 got it added. And why I chose to use it in the second sentence? Because I felt to emphasize it. [/hider] [hider=[@Spoopy Scary]] Thank you for your feedback, you made some good points and I will surely keep it in mind for the next time. [/hider]