[@The Man Emperor] Okay, new round of notes!

[list][*]His birthday is off for him being 27 in May 2021
[*]The color code is hard for me to read, so try to find something more legible 
[*]In the personal style section, this needs to be edited - "Because of his body's ability to practically ignore external temperature changes, he uses clothing that would have caused other people to sweat an ocean should they be placed in a place like the Middle East or the tropics."
[*]In the personality section, this needs to be edited. Fury is no longer Director - Maria Hill is. "He does know where to draw the line though, and is very respectful towards the likes of Victoria Hand, Maria Hill, Phil Coulson, and Director Fury."
[*]For his fears, they need to be in the bullet point format. 
[*]Under his General Skills, you ought to list Swedish - this isn't considered a specialty skill since he was born and raised in Sweden. 
[*]In the What Is On Your Person section, list his usual clothing for when on the job
[*]Since he has a bachelor's degree in Criminology, I definitely recommend listing Criminology for one of his skills - this one would be Specialty 
[*]I'm fine with you using the Faustus Program in your backstory, that's a neat angle. ^^ [/list]

Sorry for the delay with these, yesterday was my little brother's birthday.