[@The Man Emperor] Okies notes:

[list][*]For fears, swap Death out for something else - since basically everyone is afraid of dying
[*]Jack of All Trades (Engineering) should go under general skills. Parkour should go under specialty skills. So swap those two. 
[*]Include a link to a post you've done in the anything else - you can put the one you've done so far for Astrad 
[*]Under extras, mention that he is a native to Earth-670
[*]Also in his history section, could you put under a hider a one paragraph description of his life on Earth-670? [/list]