[quote=@Flagg]no objections on my end- [@Gunther], lmk what you think![/quote] You know I appreciate your writing style. I have read some of your book and it is good for what I have seen. I recommended only one minor change early on. I suggest we begin with a collaboration between the two of us. I know this is Advanced Roleplay so it will introduce our characters in a big way. We can talk about this in a PM--write on Google docs.